Sunday, 21 August 2016

Day 163- Back On Track (Today)

I had a lot of time to write today, so I got to update my vampire story a few hours earlier than I usually do. This was the most plot-twisting update so far.
In case you didn't bother to read my story, here's the short version:
Axl was dating Stephanie Seymour, who was a vampire, but Axl didn't know. On one date, she bites him and drinks his blood, leaving his unconscious body on the bed. He has a painful transformation. Later that night, he sneaks out and bites a rabid dog, killing it from blood loss. He sneaks back to the apartment and almost gets off scot-free, but Izzy catches him taking off blood-splatter clothes after hours of screaming and coming back from the roof. Izzy assumes Axl killed Stephanie and warns him that he knows. Over the next 20 days, Axl repeats the pattern and drinks down a stray every night. Izzy sees him leaving every night and confronts him about it. Being in a closed quarters with a human and a thirst building is making Axl uncomfortable, so he tries to escape by punching Izzy in the face. This busts open Izzy's lip and blood spills. Axl loses all control and bites Izzy, much in the same way Stephanie did.
So that's the story. Between the time I posted the update and the four hours after, I got four reviews by four different people. Here they are, because I just love bragging about people loving me:

 Please for the love of all that is pure, make Izzy a vampire too!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes!! Yes!! Oh my God, fucking YES! I'm so happy that you did this, thank you! I loved this chapter even before Izzy became a vampire (he is one now, yes?)? This line: "Izzy’s still a little wary of me, as he thinks I murdered Stephanie, Slash and Duff are just eye-fucking each other all the time and Steven, well, he’s an oblivious cream puff."I loved it, it was hilarious. The part about Slash's butt imprint was also genius. So there's a SLuff here, huh? Will they feature more in the story? Also, what will happen between Axl and Izzy? And how, if at all, will Axl be able to go back to drinking animal blood after he's tasted human blood? Please update soon!

I like this♡

Another great chapter! I really like how, when Axl drains Izzy, the narrative calls him "my meal", as though Axl is in total predator vampire mode. Then when Izzy speaks, he's "Izzy" again, snapping Axl out of his bloodthirst. An amazing touch! As always, I'm excited to see how this plays out; will Izzy survive and be the first member of Axl's coven? Or will he die, and Axl will have grief and anger and a dead bandmate to deal with?

Tomorrow, I might have something more exciting to write about. Maybe. As it's summer and I'm on my period, there isn't a lot of variation from day to day.

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